2008年1月30日水曜日

My advice to new sophomore

What I felt about Writing 3 of fall-semester is that I could write some posts on my blog. I had a chance to make English sentences because I didn't write them when I was a freshman. So, I want to suggest to new sophomores that students must write words in English. Because, I became to like writing words in English because I wrote my feelings on my blog. Then, I want to say to next Writing 3 students that they should to practice typing words quickly and to read some sentences. If students will be able to read fast, they will understand more their class. I took pains about them.(110 words)

Her big event!

Yesterday, my sister recieved a letter, which was written about that she can pass high school's exsamination. So, I found that she can pass the test. I am happy now because she also be happy. She must have a test soon and I believe she will be able to pass the exsamination.

2008年1月29日火曜日

About what I want to do.

I want to try to do new job, which is flower shop or cake shop. Because, I wanted to be a person who can make cakes or sweets. So, I want to try a clerk at cake shop.

Finding new job?

I must retire my part time job because my business place will be close after a month. I heard about this news from maneger. I am so suprised at what the shop will be close. So, I must search newpart time job.

My plan

I have a travel plan with my friend. We will go to Kyoto to do sightseeing. I am looking forward to seeing old temples and buildings where Japanese king stayed in. I'm interested in Japanese histories. So, I wanted to go to there. I will write about my impressing which I go to Kyoto again.

What I want to do at spring vacation.

I will finish taking tests soon. Because, yesterday is last day of fall- term test. I will be happy when I can pass my tests. However, I have no doing on spring vacation. My friend said to me that "you should try cooking. Espessialy, I like to make sweets and cakes. " when I consulted with my friend about doing about a matter at spring vacation. So, I want to try to find my hobbies.

2008年1月16日水曜日

A ceremony for 20 agers

I went to a ceremony for 20 agers. It is important for me to attend it because I can't go it only when I am 20 age. I weared kimono, which is color light green and white. Parts of white is chrysanthemum. It is my mother's. However, I put on it. It is beautiful because it was made before 30 age. It doesn't at all stains. I visited it with my friends, ans she is so beautiful. I listed mayor of Kumamoto and I thought I must have behavior's responsibility because I become 20 age.

Typing

It is difficult for me to type many words on time. The reason why I don’t like it is to be late it and I don’t remember key where is located. However, I have good points, because I am interested in computers. I didn’t like computers but, I became to like typing computers because I like computers. So, I like typing keys recently.(63words)

2008年1月9日水曜日

Book Review2-18" Animal Tales"


I don't like this story named Animal Tales. This main character is an elephant. He is a child. So, He has many questions. For example, about why do hippopotamus have red eyes. Many animals got angry because they don't know answers. I think so. Then, a child elephant went to know the answer about that what do crocodiles eat and he met crocodile. He answered to him that I will eat you!! He was bite him short nose. So, he has a long feather. This story is that all. So, I don't like this story because it is not interesting for me. I wanted to know the real reason why flephant's has long nose.

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Book reviews

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7

18


Blog posts
14
16
14
15
20
79

Words
877
1743203723351535
8527

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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)































































































































































1.1. Showcase


Short
titles


[+ links]
Dates
(yy.mm.dd)

W
C
L
P
M
Notes
Mega-
essay
07.10.12

Memrial Festival in Kumamoto castel


Dialect in Kumamoto

Character in Kumamoto

Famous people in Kumamoto

2007,10,10

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57

96

43

161

0

2

0

0


0

0
0
Eash posts are parts of Mega essays. I couldn't edit parts which I wrote.
Favorite
place(-s)
07.10.26
To be important for me
2007.10.26
5
401
0
0
0
0

Movie
review
07.11.11
MovieRerview-01"ToyStory"
2007.11.11
6
517
1
0
0
0

Community
life
07.11.25
About better life
2007.11.25
6
507
2
0
0
0

TV in Japan
07.12.09
Let's watch news programs
2007.12.09
8
601
1
6
0
0

Learning with
computers
07.12.21
Learning with computers
2007.12.21
10
521
1
0
0
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Key:


¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links


P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included


1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.



  • I think that my best essay is "Let's watch news programs" which is kind of TV in Japan. The reason why I like it is that I was able to write much words and I could adjust my mind on this post.



2.0. Comments















































































































































Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
Call for typing speed trial topic suggestions
2007. 11.20
28
bad
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*Toy story
2007,11,14
84
not bad
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

About better life

2007,12,05

30

not bad
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*

About better life

2007,12,05

30

not bad
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2008,01,12
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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40

not good
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*

Dialect in Kumamoto

2007,10,10

21

good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2008,01,12
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38

good





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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.



2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?




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2.6. Additional reflections on comments





  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]


3.0. Typing Speed Trials











































Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*

40

2007,10,17
3.2. Best typing speed trial*

107
2007,10,24
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)

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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** 68

2007,11,14


2007,11,21


2007,12,5




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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.



4.0. Book Reviews

























































































































































































































































































4.1. ShowcaseShort titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd)WordsComments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01

Jungle Book
2007,10,01
168

0
2-02
HenryⅧ and his wives
2007,10,02

79

0
2-03
Robinson Crusoe

2007,10,09

139

0
2-04

Anne of the Green Gables

2007,10,09

140
0
2-05

The Love of a King

2007,10,15

120

0
2-06

Alice's Adventure in Wonderland

2007,10,16

60
0
2-07

White Fang

2007,11,06

183

0
2-08
Washington Square
2007,11,27

207

0
2-09

The Secret Garden

2007,12,05

218
0
2-10

The black tulip
2007,12,30

167

0
2-11

Jane Eyre

2008,01,08
201
0
2-12

Audrey Hepburn

2008,01,08
92

0
2-13
Romeo and Juliet
2008,01,08
92

0
2-14
A Christmas Carol
2008,01,08

118

0
2-15

Little Women
2008,01,08
99

0
2-16
Heidi
2008,01,08
116

0
2-17

The prisoner of Zenda

2008,01,08

110

0
2-18
Animal Tales
2008,01,09
114
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TOTALS:


Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).



4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.




  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]



5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media






































































































































































































Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?

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5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
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5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
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5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?


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5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
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5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
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  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")

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  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)

0





  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

My bolg has only links.





  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)

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5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? 0





  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

  • My blog has 1 other label, diary.


    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.



    • This counts are fall semester's memories.


books: 18 posts


diary:17
essays:9 posts but, posts of Kumamoto has 3 essays.

links:8

photo: 16

portofolios: 2

quickposts: 12

reviews: 7

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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?
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  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


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  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?


    • _16_ posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
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  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*




    • _8__ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

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  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?




    • _0__ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:



6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing



7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

・ We should write more than 500 words because we must improve our ability of explaining about detail of sentences written in English.


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2008年1月8日火曜日

Book Review2-17" The Prisoner of Zenda"


The story's main character is Rudolf Rassendyll. He went to watch a King's party. Another man, price Rudolf, went to the kingdom because he also went to watch it. When they went to it, they met each other. They are surprised by them because, they are similar. So, Rudolf prince liked him and they drink in his house. However, prince had a sick because someone put some poison in his glass. Price must go to a party the day because he must be King. So, Rudolf Rossendy go to the party for prince. I don't believe it. I must not do the things even if the prince had a sick.

Book Review2-16" Heidi"


I love this story because I watched this animation and I read a book. The story is about a girl named Heidi. She lost her parents but, she went to her mother's father's house located in Switzerland. Her grand father don't like a child but, he becomes to like her soon because she is a innocence girl. However, she was taken to Germany to be friend with Klara. Klara can't walk. So, she can't go outside and she dosen't have any friends. Heidi and Klara become a friends each other. However, Heidi has a sick because she couldn't returen to Switzerland. If I were Heidi, I would be not able to live in another place along.

Book Review2-15" Little Women"


I like this story because the sisters, Meg, Jo, Beth and Amy, have independent minds and they have breve to live without her father in period of war. This story's main character is Jo who is second sister. She is out going compare with her sisters. She has friend of Laurie, who lives next to her house. He is kind and handsome man but, I don't like him. Because, I think that a man like him don't understand her works. She wants to be a writer. I think that Jo should get a boyfriend who can understand about her.

Book Review2-14" A Christmas Carol"


This story’s main character is a old man, Scrooge, who dose not believe to be important the Christmas. He hated Christmas because he thought that it is not important for his life. However, he becomes to believe it because he saw his friend’s ghost, Marley. Marley had died in past time. He went to say that Scrooge must remember it is important. So, he meets a fairly which went to be back to his past. Finally, he notices that it is important. I didn’t know that Christmas is important for foreighers. I thought that it is just day. However, Christmas is a important day when many people spend with family and friends or people become to be happy.(118words)