About better life

Community life
Introduction
Our town in now
We live in Kumamoto. So, what I stay in Kumamoto is to live a community life for me. The place where I live in has some good points. They are nature and culture. We are proud of about them. Now, we have some good things but, we must think about what better improving of Kumamoto in the future. Accordingly, I want to tell you about my future plane of Kumamoto.
Body
Characteristic of Kumamoto in now
Nature
(caldera)
There are some natures in Kumamoto. First, Mt. Aso has the biggest caldera on top of the mountain in the world. I have ever been to there only one time However, I can’t see it because the mountain has much smock. The smoke is not good for our health. So, I couldn’t see the caldera.
(waterfall)
I know what a beautiful waterfall is in Kumamoto. In summer, you will feel cold close to it and in winter, you will be able to see so beautiful waterfall frozen and it is like a large crystal.
(Kumamoto castle )
Kumamoto castle was built before 400 years. Its owner was Kato Kiyomasa. He was a famous soldier in Kumamoto. We are proud of him because to be able to live in here is to thanks to him. So, the festival was opening all this year round what we don’t forget him.
Traffic
I don’t like Kumamoto’s traffic systems because it has some dangerous and inconvenient. Especially, many streets are so narrow. When I was on the bicycle, I was hit by bicycle sometimes. I should change the system.
I said that about dangerous of Kumamoto’s traffic. However, I love to get on a street car because I had used them to go to downtown with my family or a cousin. I think that the system is dangerous but, it will become convenient if we can use it well.
~Kumamoto in the future~
Social welfare
We must make social welfare system full before we remake each city. I heard from my friend studying in social welfare subject that, in Kumamoto, there are few welfare facilities in our town. For example, sidewalk has many steps and slopes are located in Kumamoto station but, they don’t function. Because, they are so steep slope and physically handicapped persons can’t go through it. So, we should change the systems.
About criminals
Today, there are many criminals in Japan. Especially, traffic accidents always might happen us. We must be careful not to do traffic accident. I think that walkers and drivers should watch each of them when they are in outside. So, our city will change better peaceful community life.
Conclusion
I noticed that many people must do now. I knew that we must make a country where people can live in peace. I think that there is no it in the world. However, we have some technique to make new things. We must use it now. If we use the skills to improve our society, a community life will be better. (507 words)