2007年7月25日水曜日

I am having test now

Today I will write about my dram. I want to be a police officer in my future because I want to work to having trable. However, I study English in this university because I want to to work to foreighers. A lot of foreighers and travelers are coming to Japan recently. When they come to Japan, they will have travel. I want to help them having some trables. (68 words)

2007年7月24日火曜日

Traveling

I have traveled around Shikoku where is a small island in Japan. Shikoku is made by Tokushima, Ehime, Kagawa and Kochi. They are prefectures in Japan. I like there because I could see a lot of things I have never seen in Shikoku. For example, I was moved my mind when I saw a temple on the sea. The temple was built by Tairanokiyomori in past time. Tairanokiyomori was a sumrai but he became a monk after. I watched a lot of whirls in a river from a ship. There were many whirls. I enjoyed travel in Shikoku. Now, some students had gone to abroad to study. I believe what they return without injury and sick.

About my name

Today I will tell you about my name's mean. I read a book before. It is about Cleopatra. I like to study about history so, I begin to read the book. There are many character in the book. First of all, this story starts from Cieopatra's childhood. She has two sisters. She was a youngest sister in her family. However, she has become a queen in Egypt because her sisters had been killed by someone. Triphaina who I use in this blog is her oldest siser. She was killed by another sister. The book which I read was wirtten about her who is a kind for Cleopatra.

Jack Sparrow in this movie

If I finish tests in this season, I will go to Shimotouri. I don't lke shopping but, I want to buy clothes and novels. I am going to read some books about 10 in summer vacation. Especially, I like Steaven King's work. I watched movies of his work recently. It is "Seacret Window" and "Dream Catcher".They were very thrilling movie,but I like them. Johnny Depp apears in this movie and he is main chracter. I had forgotten his name. This movie's story is man who has a mantal sick. He couldn't notice his movement that he killed his wife, burn her home, and so on. In the end, He had noticed his sick but he has another chracter in his mind. So he had change. I was suprise this story. If you can't watch this movie, you should watch it in this summer. I think you must feel cool.

2007年7月22日日曜日

I feel warm now

It is warm today. I was studying now but, there is not cooler my room so, I feel warm now. I was finding that to use coolers many time is bad for our earth. However, I can't stay my room. So I decide to go to convenience store to be cool down. Oh! but I must study because I will have to test tomorrow.

Test

I couldn't study about test because I was busy. I must do my part time job this week because there are many KGU students in our workplace. I wanted have a break in this week. However, I was studying English becase I decide to write 70 post on my blog a week.

2007年7月18日水曜日

Blog for me

I don’t like blog because I hate a computer. I always am confusing when I use a computer. It is difficult for me to use computers. However, I like to write essay on my blog and I like to see my friends blog. Everyone make colorful blog. So I watch them sometimes, but I don’t write comment for friends.

[59 words]


2007年7月16日月曜日

I never put suger into coffee

I don't like coffee put suger. I have ever had coffee with suger, but I took a dislike to sweet coffee. I don't know a reason but I felt that coffee don't match with suger. How do you think about it? I think that we should not put suger into a cup of coffee.....

Summer Vacation

I don't like summer, but I love summer vacation. I have some plan in summer. First, I want to go to Kyoto because I am interested in Kyoto's history and shrine or temple. Because I'm interested in Shinsengumi armed groupe in Edo period, I want to there. Second, I wnat to read 10 novels in English in summer vacation. I don't like novels written in English so much, but I must have a power to writing English because I must have WritingⅢ in next season. Third, I will go to sea alone with my bicycle. I like to see sea. Ah, this is not jock!Seriously, I like sea. But I don't like to go in sea.

2007年7月14日土曜日

American dramas

I go to a rental video shop sometimes because I like to watch American drama. For example, I watched 24, ER, Prison Brake and LOST. I like many American dramas, especially, my favorite one is LOST. This story are about victims who rode on a airplane to Australia. However, this airplane had broken and passengers must live in a island where is close from a place which the airplane crashed. This drama's main charactor is a doctor, Jack. This island has beautiful nature, forest and sea, but monsters lived in there. If I were a passenger, I would die soon. I think so.... But I want to see the island because the sea is so beautiful. So, I like ER, too. It is a story which some doctors save many people's life. My mind was moved sometimes when doctors could save the life. So I like this drama. Finally, my favorite one is 24. This drama's main charactor is Jake. LOST's main charactor is same name. I wonder if "Jack is major name in America?"when I watched the drama. Jack is an argent in Amarica. His work is to save American and the presidant. I watched this drama's series 1, 2, 3 and 4. I look forward to watch 24 in movie because this drama was made as movie.

2007年7月11日水曜日




ID: wxyz
Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays



















































































































































1.1. Catalog

Titles of posts with links
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words
Numbers of comments
Example
Restaurant: Star of India
2007.03.13
185
1
1st (introduction)
April (150+ words)
The reason why I study English
2007.30.06
30
0
2nd (campus life)
May (200+ words)
English Lounge
2007.05.19
54
0
3rd (your choice)
June 5 (250+ words)
My favorite things 2007.06.22
255
0
4th (Kumamoto)
June 18 (250+ words)
I love Kumamoto, but.... 2007.06.17
258
2
5th (review 1)
July 2 (175+ words)
My favorite movie

2007,7,1

190

1
6th (review 2)
July 16 (200+ words)
American dramas

2007,7,14

219

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Note: Calculate totals without the example.



1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.


・My best essay is " I love Kumamoto, but..." because I can write Kumamoto's
features. I like here but there are some bad points. I believe that we become to like Kumamoto if we understand here's bad points. So I like this post which I could insist my option on.


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Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog
May Day or "Mayday!" -What's the differernce 2007.05.01
41
not bad
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blogGmail and Writing studio blog

2007,07,18

48
short
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog
I love Kumamoto, but...
2007,06,17
71

good
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays

I love Kumamoto, but....
2007,06,17
71
good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007,07,21
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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35

short
2.4.2. Any of your other posts
American dramas

2007,07,14
219
not bad
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2007,07,21
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?---
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35
not bad






* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:

・I think friend's comment is important for my blog.





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Numbers of words
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial
36
2007.05.09
3.2. Best typing speed trial

97

2007,6,13
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials

56

2007,06,27

2007,07,04

2007,07,11








4.0. Book Reviews  




















































































































































































































































































































































































































4.1. CatalogTitles of posts with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)Number of wordsNumbers of comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
2007.05.16
39
1
1-01
Emma
2007.04.24
85
0
1-02
Pocahontas
2007.05.02
85
0
1-03
A LITTLE PRINCESS
2007.05.06
149
0
1-04
Aladdin
2007.05.15
100
0
1-05
The Phantom of the Opera

2007,05,28

85
0
1-06
The cantervill ghost
2007,05,29

121
0
1-07
Love or Money
2007,06,12
155
0
1-08

Mary Queen of Scot

2007,06,12

111
0
1-09

Five Fairy Tales

2007,06,24
142
0
1-10
Huckleberry Finn

2007,07,03

90
0
1-11
The Muder in the Rue Morgue

2007,07,03
90
0
1-12
Jane Eyre

2007,07,03

119

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TOTALS:
1360

0

Note: Calculate totals without the example.




4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

・My favorite book review is "Huckleberry Finn" because I can write 97 words and I like this story. This story is adventure with a boat. Huck and Jim escape to have a freedom to Canada. I was excited by this book. So I like this book review.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation















































































































































































































































































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Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?
yes

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? yes

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week? yes

5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?
yes

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?
yes

5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately):---
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  • "books" (plural)

yes


  • "essays" (plural)

yes


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)
yes

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
yes







  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • diary (26posts)

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  • Which labels, and how many posts each?
    • books (12)
    • diary(31)
    • essays(6)
    • proto-portfolio(3)
    • quickposts(12)
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5.3. Links & media---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures?
yes



  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?

yes







  • How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics?

・10 pictures

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5.3.2. Posts with multiple links---
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  • How many of your posts include three (3) or more links?
    • 1
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
no






  • How many of your blog posts include other media?
    • 0
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5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?

  • I wroto about my favorite things and my past.


6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:

My blog has parts of strange because I don't understand how to use the computer. So I could not complete my blog.

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:
  
・I should put many pictures on my blog.

My friend in America

I like g-mail because I can send e-mails. I sometimes sends e-mails to America. My friend in high school days had gone to America to study English. Before she went to America, we had changed g-mail address and each other can send g-mails. I am very apriciate to g-mail because we can get e-mails.

[54 words]

2007年7月4日水曜日

English teacher

When I was a high school student, I like my English teacher. She had ever taught Japanese in America. She speaks English fruently. I asked many question her. However, I was a second grade, she left our school. Because her dream is to become a English teacher, she left our school. She had gone to Tokyo. (56 words)

2007年7月3日火曜日

Book Review1-12"Jane Eyre"


This book was wrote by Charlotte Bronte. I felt that I want to have mind like hers when I finished to read this book. She had been alone in childhood. Because she is cleverer than her cousins, she was hated by her aunt. So, she was entered in a poor school. She could have a friend, Helen, but Helen died soon. Jane grow up in the school and she became a tutor like Ms. Temple. And she met Mr.Rochester who she will get married with. I think she has been alone when she was a child, but she could meet a man who understand all of her. I was confortable and was become happy in the end of story.

Book Review1-11"THE MURDERS IN THE RUE MORGUE"


I have ever heard writter who wrote this book. His name Edger Allan Poe. I studied aboout him and his work. He was a excellent novelist because he syudied in Europe in childhood. I knew his novel's sentenses are great. This book also is very interesting and thrilling. A man who search for a fact is main character. His name is Auguste Dupin. He had many mystery. It was difficult for me to read and understand this book. However, I am interested in setting of a room which don't open.

2007年7月1日日曜日

My favorite movies

I have a favorite movie. The movie is The Sixth Sense. Do you know this movie? This movie is written and directed by M. Night Syamalan. his mo I was shocked this story and last when I was a high school student because boy's doctor was gentle but he was killed by his patient at the begging. Most of people said to me about feeling for the movie that it is thrilling. But I didn't believe thrilling because I felt that this story is impressed by a boy being able to see ghosts. He was worrying because he can communicate with ghosts. However, his doctor gave him advice that a boy should contact with them activity and they must have a reason why they stay in the world. They need your help! I noticed that I had prejudice. Their looks were fearful but they had a human's mind. I think he had brave because he understood a reason why ghosts appear in front of him. If I can see ghost, I will be not able to do nothing. In the end, I hope I also can have brave like him.